Kosenu
KosenuOkay, I made a poem. But one with a twist. Whoever finds out what's shifty about this one gets to request a subject, so have a good look. One hint: it is something related to the Dragon Language, and not to poetry (meaning rhyme schemes, amount of syllables, etc. etc. etc.). Fodiiz ko luft, ahrk ven ko om. Gut nol hofkiin, het ko fin krah brom.
Fos dreh laan het? Fos lost nii fah? Fos fen ahst laat, drun oblaan wah yah? Okay, since no one seems to be able to find it out, I'll tell y'all: no subject is specified. You could read it as a poem about someone wondering about what he is doing, a plea from one friend to the other to get back to reality (asking him to wonder what he's doing, if you will), or someone talking/thinking about a 'he' or 'she' who is completely lost. I thought it would be more obvious than it apparently is, but then again, I suppose I can't judge that since I've written it. Thanks for your attempts over at the wall, guys and gals.
Kosenu
December 27, 2014 |
KosenuOkay, I made a poem. But one with a twist. Whoever finds out what's shifty about this one gets to request a subject, so have a good look. One hint: it is something related to the Dragon Language, and not to poetry (meaning rhyme schemes, amount of syllables, etc. etc. etc.). Fodiiz ko luft, ahrk ven ko om. Gut nol hofkiin, het ko fin krah brom.
Fos dreh laan het? Fos lost nii fah? Fos fen ahst laat, drun oblaan wah yah? Okay, since no one seems to be able to find it out, I'll tell y'all: no subject is specified. You could read it as a poem about someone wondering about what he is doing, a plea from one friend to the other to get back to reality (asking him to wonder what he's doing, if you will), or someone talking/thinking about a 'he' or 'she' who is completely lost. I thought it would be more obvious than it apparently is, but then again, I suppose I can't judge that since I've written it. Thanks for your attempts over at the wall, guys and gals. |