Ahnok, taar !

First, sorry for my bad english ; I'm french.
So. There was some time, I tried to translate "Tale of the Tongues" in Dovahzul. But, there was a bug and I lost all my work ! D8
Today, I have translate the first verse. Hope you like it !
 

Tey do faal Sahkrenne
Tale of the Tongues

 

Viingge do Alduin, nust drey gevul faal lok,
Ok rein, yol do nah, ahrk ok vriihe krezaahe.
Muz lost ru ahrk nust donriil, nust lost kriif, ahrk nust lost,
Nust lost ag, nust lost sosaal, ol nust komeyt nust graat.

Alduin's wings, they did darken the sky.
His roar, fury's fire and his scales, (sharpened) scythes.
Men ran and they cowered, (and) they fought, and they died,
They burned, and they bled, as they issued their cries. 

Be patient. Kos premaal.
Following coming soon.

Lok, thu'um !

Thanks for posting, and good job on the translation!

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That looks great so far! Nice job!

I also do a bit of translating english songs into Dovahzul, and I often change lines so that they rhyme in Dovahzul. Will you do that too, or are you planning to do a direct translation?

Nope, i'm not working about the rhymes, but that's a great idea !
Just, I've try to "cut" into the lyrics, to have rhythm in Dovahzul... For exemple I've changed "sharpened scythes" in "scythes" (krezaahe)... It reminds me that I have to continue this translation. ^^

that was great to see it ^^