MED FIN VOR9 G2NNE
HI FEN KOS D1L3N, HI FEN KOS TOVIT3N F4 PRUD1S
F4 ZILF R2 KRENOKT1S SIL 4RK H4DRIM
FOS 4KONNE MU S3
Need a proofread
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 Mirkrilaar November 13, 2014 |
Med fin vorey geinneHi fen kos daalin, hi fen kos tovitiin fah prudaasFah zilf rei krenoktaas sil ahrk hahdrimFos ahkonne mu sii |
by Mirkrilaar
November 13, 2014
Med fin vorey geinneHi fen kos daalin, hi fen kos tovitiin fah prudaasFah zilf rei krenoktaas sil ahrk hahdrimFos ahkonne mu sii
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Mirkrilaar November 13, 2014 |
Like the other ones You will be (daalin), you will be will search for paradise For silver row divideing soul and mind What troubles we apparition |
by Mirkrilaar
November 13, 2014
Like the other ones You will be (daalin), you will be will search for paradise For silver row divideing soul and mind What troubles we apparition
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Mirkrilaar November 13, 2014 |
What exactly are you trying to say? What was translated? Because the only error I saw was 'daalin'. |
by Mirkrilaar
November 13, 2014
What exactly are you trying to say? What was translated? Because the only error I saw was 'daalin'.
 okaaz November 13, 2014 |
original text: Just like the rest i have tweaked it while translating into: Like the other ones You will be returning you will be searching for paradise For silver line separating soul and mind What troubles we find edit: daal (return) -iin |
by okaaz
November 13, 2014
original text:
Just like the rest
You'll be coming back if you're looking for paradise
The silver line it separates your body from your mind
What a mess we're in
i have tweaked it while translating into:
Like the other ones
You will be returning you will be searching for paradise
For silver line separating soul and mind
What troubles we find
edit: daal (return) -iin
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Mirkrilaar November 13, 2014 |
okaaz To correct 'daalin', it would be 'daaltaas'. |
by Mirkrilaar
November 13, 2014
okaazoriginal text:
Just like the rest
You'll be coming back if you're looking for paradise
The silver line it separates your body from your mind
What a mess we're ini have tweaked it while translating into:
Like the other ones
You will be returning you will be searching for paradise
For silver line separating soul and mind
What troubles we find
To correct 'daalin', it would be 'daaltaas'.
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okaaz November 13, 2014 |
thank you! i need to better familarise myself with tenses and suffixes it seems. another edit: that "sii" should be "siiv". oops |
by okaaz
November 13, 2014
thank you! i need to better familarise myself with tenses and suffixes it seems.
another edit: that "sii" should be "siiv". oops
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Mirkrilaar November 13, 2014 |
Its fine! We all learn at our own pace. If you need anything else, message me and I'll help as much as I can. |
by Mirkrilaar
November 13, 2014
Its fine! We all learn at our own pace. If you need anything else, message me and I'll help as much as I can.
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