link to the Story(Is on a Google Doc): (Link)
Yolos, Priest of Fire
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 Vuldovyol May 14, 2018 |
link to the Story(Is on a Google Doc): (Link) |
by Vuldovyol
May 14, 2018
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Vuldovyol May 14, 2018 |
If you had not figured it out, Yolos is my Character on Letters from Bromjunaar. |
by Vuldovyol
May 14, 2018
If you had not figured it out, Yolos is my Character on Letters from Bromjunaar.
 Sildolok May 16, 2018 |
A few pointers, first of all I think you should lower the font size its a little distracting. Secondly, try and describe the environment a little more... descriptively... Apart from that, I'm eager to see more! |
by Sildolok
May 16, 2018
A few pointers, first of all I think you should lower the font size its a little distracting.
Secondly, try and describe the environment a little more... descriptively...
Apart from that, I'm eager to see more!
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Vuldovyol May 16, 2018 |
I'm still writing it. |
by Vuldovyol
May 16, 2018
I'm still writing it.
 NikkoSossedov1 June 13, 2018 |
KEEP WRITING, FOR THIS LOOKS LIKE THE BEGINNING OF A GRAND ADVENTURE. (ps I am mocking the font size cuz I can) |
by NikkoSossedov1
June 13, 2018
KEEP WRITING, FOR THIS LOOKS LIKE THE BEGINNING OF A GRAND ADVENTURE. (ps I am mocking the font size cuz I can)
 Shezzarine August 1, 2018 |
Nice! keep going!
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by Shezzarine
August 1, 2018
Nice! keep going!
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