Grammar/trans check, please :D thanks!

1.       “Krii dovahkiin! Krii prodah kriid! Krii kodaavsejer!” (Kill the dragonborn! Kill the fated slayer! Kill the bear of the east!)

2.       “Voth fus Zu’u jaariliin hin laas” (With force I will protect your life)

3.       “Funtaan!” (I have failed!)

4.       “Meyz! Naak dii sil, dovahkiin! Mu kosliin gein!” (Come! Eat my soul, Dragonborn! We will be one!)

5.       “Zu’u naakliin hein qethhe!” (I will eat your bones!) -- Need the retain "your" here as it is an insult directed at specific individuals

1. Correct!
2. Correct, too!
3. This works, "Zu'u funtaan" might be better if context isn't enough.
4. *kosiin, "-liin" is only for verbs that end a vowel.
5. Same as #4, "naakiin".

Thanks!