Voth dwiin sil ahrk tuz

Nonvul Bron prodah dinok

Nuz krif voth ahkrin

Would this work? I'm trying to see if I can use "dwiin" as both a verb and an adjective in the first line. Might be too poetic. I'm still not too terribly familiar with how various parts of speech interact in Dovahzul, and I'm experimenting a bit.

Also, am I leaving the second line too open to interpretation? The way I wrote it, it could mean either the Nord's death or just death in general. Would this be clarified by the juxtaposition of that phrase and "krif voth ahkrin"?

Also, am I looking too far into this for a simple haiku? :P

Zinrahzul
Dwiin works fine in that context. I feel the second line is vague enough to require an explanation. Alternatively you could use: "Nonvul bron dreh drun dinok"

I was trying to imply that he could foresee his own death, but I'm not really sure how to convey that while staying within the syllable count. Regardless, haiku is fun! Let's try another...

Vul fahliil kiirre

Hun tey do hofkiin ahrk yol

Strunmahsesahqo

Hahdremro

I was trying to imply that he could foresee his own death, but I'm not really sure how to convey that while staying within the syllable count.

Instead of "Dinok", could "Praanii" work?

Ruvgein

Instead of "Dinok", could "Praanii" work?

That's a definite improvement! I might have to write this one down in runes some time. I like it much more with that edit.

Also, Zin, that made me chuckle. Pruzah pel!

Frinmulaar
Another suggestion besides praanii. 'Daanii'.

This is much more accurate to the meaning I was trying to imply. And now I know the word Daan! Kogaan med pah tiid, Frinmulaar!

Just found out about this recently:

Dovahkiin Lovaas!

Alduin bein rel oblaan...

Faal Zulle Lovaas?

[Drem yol lok wah hi,]

[Zu'u lost goraan bo het,]

[Nii los pruzah het!]

Drem yol lok wah hi,

Zu'u lost goraan bo het,

Nii los pruzah het!

(I'm new so that might be a bit wrong, sorry if it is!) :)

Jul laan "wo med rah?"

Ruz Rah tinvaak wah fin jul

"Hon pah vomed Rah."

I'm not very creative when it comes to literature so I just based it off of my name.