(back to the story. ) Makor is bleeding out and watching Khadba squeeze the life out of Hadar. also on the side is sauriil looking at falin trying to see she is wearing anything under her shirt.. (ok i made some of that up.. but i just needed us back on track)

Khadba staggers from Falin jumping on him. He, however, doesn't let go of Hadar.

He yells as falin sinks her teeth into his neck in what resembles a weird neck kiss to the onlookers.

grimlaarkin

also on the side is sauriil looking at falin trying to see she is wearing anything under her shirt..

(Bahaha I'm dying xD)

Warm blood quickly flows into Falin's mouth from the inflicted wound. She twists her head in an attempt to tear off as much flesh as possible.

Khadba roars again and brings Hadars head up and smashes it into falin- knocking all three of them on the ground .

(It's a surprise that Hadar ain't dead xD. if Hadar had his full power he would totally kick khadbas ass >:)

(yea, well you haven't seen khadba out of prison.. lol. you never will because hopefully you guys kill him soon.)

grimlaarkin

(yea, well you haven't seen khadba out of prison.. lol. you never will because hopefully you guys kill him soon.)

 

(same with Makor) 

YolGoraagSingh

(same with Makor) 

(sooo...Makor is supposed to die?)

grimlaarkin

(sooo...Makor is supposed to die?)

(no, I thought you were talking about toughness)

Khadba rolls over and starts getting back up off of the ground. blood drips from his neck onto  Falin who is underneath him. " die bitch!" he shouts and tries to punch her only to realize he is still holding hadar with that hand.

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Slightly dazed, Falin growled. Realizing the shiv was still in her grasp, she stabbed upwards.

(there comes times where my character is highly insignificant :D lol)

Khadba yells... again... this time he tries to headbutt her from his impractical position, resulting in him placing his forhead on Falin's left boob. once again the onlookers feel like they are watching some WAY too violent sex scene.