Fiction Songwriting/Poetry to Dovahzul
 Zinrahzul November 9, 2017 |
@Hahdremro kogaan fah hin rotte! I think I'm inspired to add two more elements to the song, using [feim zii gron] and [ven gaar nos]... |
 Hahdremro November 9, 2017 |
Zinrahzul Would this be in additional verses? I could see [ven gaar nos] working, especially if juxtaposed with the description of the storm, but [feim zii gron] may work better as a metaphor, or if you put it near the "mu oblaan" part at the end. |
Zinrahzul
@Hahdremro kogaan fah hin rotte! I think I'm inspired to add two more elements to the song, using [feim zii gron] and [ven gaar nos]...
Would this be in additional verses? I could see [ven gaar nos] working, especially if juxtaposed with the description of the storm, but [feim zii gron] may work better as a metaphor, or if you put it near the "mu oblaan" part at the end.
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Zinrahzul November 9, 2017 |
@Hahdremro those are the exact places I plan on putting them! Feim really describes well the sentiment at the end while ven describes the wrath of the storm. |
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Zinrahzul November 10, 2017 |
Ok, here's a better version of the "Dovahzul Sahrot Keizaal Tinvaak" ("Dovahzul Mighty Skyrim Tinvaak", Dovahzul version of "Epic Skyrim Rap" by Dan Bull) https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/sahrotkeizaaltinvaak |
Ok, here's a better version of the "Dovahzul Sahrot Keizaal Tinvaak" ("Dovahzul Mighty Skyrim Tinvaak", Dovahzul version of "Epic Skyrim Rap" by Dan Bull)
https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/sahrotkeizaaltinvaak
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Zinrahzul December 6, 2017 |
Impromptu Dovahzul Poetry: Lovaas motaad ven ahrk su'um; Nust ney ahtiid zu'u. Luvve do lok drey mah tum; Nuz piraak brii tu'um. Joor bo amativ nau fin golt; Rok haalvutaan naal qalos. Zii do joor meyz stin naal qolaas; Rotte do laas drun frin ahrk haas. Hofkiinne los het ahrk til; Nuz zok smoliin siivaan kosil. |
Lovaas motaad ven ahrk su'um;
Nust ney ahtiid zu'u.
Luvve do lok drey mah tum;
Nuz piraak brii tu'um.
Joor bo amativ nau fin golt;
Rok haalvutaan naal qalos.
Zii do joor meyz stin naal qolaas;
Rotte do laas drun frin ahrk haas.
Hofkiinne los het ahrk til;
Nuz zok smoliin siivaan kosil.
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Zinrahzul December 24, 2017 |
"Knock, Knock, Knock" "Wo til?" "Pruzah Sulserevak!" Have some Dovahzul Christmas carols! https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/dovahzul-carols Revak Vulon (O Holy Night) Revak vulon lok kunne dreh suleyk viin nii los vulon do un paaz saviik kiin Lingrah praal lein ko vokul folaas dreh liiv erei meyz ahrk siivaan faraan ko sil brit rein do hind, aan sahlo lein dreh werid fah nu gut kreh goraan morokei vu Pah nu qiilaan huzrah zii qolaas zulle revak vulon faal vulon do kreist kiin revak vulon vulin, vulon se rah --- Brit Hah Wah Lein (Joy To The World) Brit hah wah lein, fah drogu meyz aal golt junii ofaal aal enook sil meyz frin fah rok ahrk lovaas lok ahrk gol ahrk lovaas lok ahrk gol ahrk lovaas, lovaas lok ahrk gol Brit hah wah lein, saviiku rel Aal muz zulle nu kod Ol pindaar okaaz golz ahrol golt Nu Tinvaak pruzah rot Nu Tinvaak pruzah rot Nu Tinvaak tinvaak pruzah rot --- Zii Qolaas Honaan Ko Lok (Angels We Have Heard On High) Zii qolaas honaan ko lok Brit lovaas nau pindaarre ahrk strunmahhe ko tinvaak motaad su voth brit rotte Mo -------------rokei Wah rah zok alokaan Mo -------------rokei Wah rah zok alokaan - FUS RO DAH! (Jingle Bells) Mu bo zeim fin od nau fron dovahhe zeim pindaarre mu bo voth rein ahrk meyye Odahviing dreh zaan KAAN DREM OV meyz viin mu Pruzah los bo ahrk lovaas daar vulon do wundunu Ond, FUS RO DAH FUS RO DAH Fah pah venne Brit hahdrim nii los boha nau paaz dovahhe FUS RO DAH FUS RO DAH Fah pah venne Brit hahdrim nii los boha nau paaz dovahhe |
"Wo til?"
"Pruzah Sulserevak!"
Have some Dovahzul Christmas carols!
https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/dovahzul-carols
Revak Vulon (O Holy Night)
Revak vulon lok kunne dreh suleyk viin
nii los vulon do un paaz saviik kiin
Lingrah praal lein ko vokul folaas dreh liiv
erei meyz ahrk siivaan faraan ko sil
brit rein do hind, aan sahlo lein dreh werid
fah nu gut kreh goraan morokei vu
Pah nu qiilaan
huzrah zii qolaas zulle
revak vulon
faal vulon do kreist kiin
revak vulon
vulin, vulon se rah
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Brit Hah Wah Lein (Joy To The World)
Brit hah wah lein, fah drogu meyz
aal golt junii ofaal
aal enook sil meyz frin fah rok
ahrk lovaas lok ahrk gol
ahrk lovaas lok ahrk gol
ahrk lovaas, lovaas lok ahrk gol
Brit hah wah lein, saviiku rel
Aal muz zulle nu kod
Ol pindaar okaaz golz ahrol golt
Nu Tinvaak pruzah rot
Nu Tinvaak pruzah rot
Nu Tinvaak tinvaak pruzah rot
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Zii Qolaas Honaan Ko Lok
(Angels We Have Heard On High)
Zii qolaas honaan ko lok
Brit lovaas nau pindaarre
ahrk strunmahhe ko tinvaak
motaad su voth brit rotte
Mo -------------rokei
Wah rah zok alokaan
Mo -------------rokei
Wah rah zok alokaan
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FUS RO DAH!
(Jingle Bells)
Mu bo zeim fin od
nau fron dovahhe
zeim pindaarre mu bo
voth rein ahrk meyye
Odahviing dreh zaan
KAAN DREM OV meyz viin mu
Pruzah los bo ahrk lovaas daar vulon do wundunu
Ond,
FUS RO DAH
FUS RO DAH
Fah pah venne
Brit hahdrim nii los boha nau paaz dovahhe
FUS RO DAH
FUS RO DAH
Fah pah venne
Brit hahdrim nii los boha nau paaz dovahhe
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Hahdremro January 2, 2018 |
@Zinrahzul Pruzah pelle, zul-zeymahi! Los pruzaan lovasse do daar evgir, fah los ko Dovahzul! Your version of Jingle Bells made me laugh plenty, too. Brilliant translations, sonaan fron! |
@Zinrahzul Pruzah pelle, zul-zeymahi! Los pruzaan lovasse do daar evgir, fah los ko Dovahzul! Your version of Jingle Bells made me laugh plenty, too. Brilliant translations, sonaan fron!
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