My version rhymes where the original does, fits to within an unstressed syllable on each line, is entirely grammatically correct, and uses the closest canon. What are the flaws that make it suboptimal?
Spoken Dovahzul! Tinvaak!
 Frinmulaar June 14, 2017 |
My version rhymes where the original does, fits to within an unstressed syllable on each line, is entirely grammatically correct, and uses the closest canon. What are the flaws that make it suboptimal? |
by Frinmulaar
June 14, 2017
 Kronvullok June 14, 2017 |
I guess I could re-read it and practice it. Maybe the rhythm I need to follow will come to me. |
by Kronvullok
June 14, 2017
I guess I could re-read it and practice it. Maybe the rhythm I need to follow will come to me.
 Zinrahzul June 14, 2017 |
You can also split the words to see the cadence |
by Zinrahzul
June 14, 2017
You can also split the words to see the cadence
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Kronvullok June 14, 2017 |
I could try that. I will see what I can do when I get home. |
by Kronvullok
June 14, 2017
I could try that. I will see what I can do when I get home.
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Zinrahzul June 15, 2017 |
@Ruvgein it's ok, no pressure. My goal for this thread was just casual audio, so people had social incentive to share spoken Dovahzul |
by Zinrahzul
June 15, 2017
@Ruvgein it's ok, no pressure. My goal for this thread was just casual audio, so people had social incentive to share spoken Dovahzul
 Plantman June 27, 2017 |
Please correct me if this isn't the best thread to share, but Malukah made a new song! https://youtu.be/Hem9ZE3U8O8 |
by Plantman
June 27, 2017
Please correct me if this isn't the best thread to share, but Malukah made a new song!
https://youtu.be/Hem9ZE3U8O8
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Zinrahzul June 27, 2017 |
@Plantman that's really cool! It's a good example of sung Dovahzul. I was disappointed that I couldn't pick out all the words until I read the lyrics... |
by Zinrahzul
June 27, 2017
@Plantman that's really cool! It's a good example of sung Dovahzul. I was disappointed that I couldn't pick out all the words until I read the lyrics...
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Zinrahzul July 11, 2017 |
I decided to translate a poem/song I made up over 12 years ago into Dovahzul. Here's the first draft audio of it: https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/zuu-munseokaaz Lyrics: Zu'u munseokaaz! Zu'u bo gut wah fin okaaz ahrk ruz daal! Viing fundeinaan; Ko haal Pah zun; Zu'u vobein golt; Grik los laasu! Rul meyz fin hokoron, Mu rein niin hevno graan Voth fin dun ronaan Erei bein paal ulse neh daal!
Ond, zu'u munseokaaz! Zu'u aar froni ahst okaaz pah sulle! Nol fin vu wah fin vulon, Mu mahfaeraak het fah frod, Zeim fin vulon ahrk wah sul, Mu fent graan hokoronu Erei bein paal neh fen daal; Mu fent qah brit pindaar: Daar golt avaan junarre!
There is actually a melody to it, but I'll save that for later. |
by Zinrahzul
July 11, 2017
I decided to translate a poem/song I made up over 12 years ago into Dovahzul. Here's the first draft audio of it:
https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/zuu-munseokaaz
Lyrics:
Zu'u munseokaaz!
Zu'u bo gut wah fin okaaz ahrk ruz daal!
Viing fundeinaan;
Ko haal Pah zun;
Zu'u vobein golt;
Grik los laasu!
Rul meyz fin hokoron,
Mu rein niin hevno graan
Voth fin dun ronaan
Erei bein paal ulse neh daal!
Ond, zu'u munseokaaz!
Zu'u aar froni ahst okaaz pah sulle!
Nol fin vu wah fin vulon,
Mu mahfaeraak het fah frod,
Zeim fin vulon ahrk wah sul,
Mu fent graan hokoronu
Erei bein paal neh fen daal;
Mu fent qah brit pindaar:
Daar golt avaan junarre!
There is actually a melody to it, but I'll save that for later.
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Zinrahzul September 28, 2017 |
What's that? You wanted Dovahzul/English rap? https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/its-a-wonderful-day Way too fun to make... |
by Zinrahzul
September 28, 2017
What's that? You wanted Dovahzul/English rap?
https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/its-a-wonderful-day
Way too fun to make...
https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/its-a-wonderful-day
Way too fun to make...
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Zinrahzul October 16, 2017 |
Next up, a very short riff about Fall... https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/evgir-reyth-dinok/s-TZMfu |
by Zinrahzul
October 16, 2017
Next up, a very short riff about Fall...
https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/evgir-reyth-dinok/s-TZMfu
https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/evgir-reyth-dinok/s-TZMfu
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Kronvullok October 20, 2017 |
I forgot about this |
by Kronvullok
October 20, 2017
I forgot about this
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Zinrahzul October 21, 2017 |
@Kronvullok haha, it's okay. I'm having a lot of fun just simply recording. Other people have fun with it in other ways. |
by Zinrahzul
October 21, 2017
@Kronvullok haha, it's okay. I'm having a lot of fun just simply recording. Other people have fun with it in other ways.
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Zinrahzul October 27, 2017 |
Rough recording of the Dovahzul version of Dan Bull's "Epic Skyrim Rap": https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/morokei-dovahkiin-tinvaak-lovaas/s-SocjR Practicing has really helped with solidifying bthe words in my mind and speaking more clearly... |
by Zinrahzul
October 27, 2017
Rough recording of the Dovahzul version of Dan Bull's "Epic Skyrim Rap":
https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/morokei-dovahkiin-tinvaak-lovaas/s-SocjR
Practicing has really helped with solidifying bthe words in my mind and speaking more clearly...
https://soundcloud.com/user-870884150/morokei-dovahkiin-tinvaak-lovaas/s-SocjR
Practicing has really helped with solidifying bthe words in my mind and speaking more clearly...
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Kronvullok October 29, 2017 |
Mind sending the lyrics so I can practice? I'm pretty good at the English version. |
by Kronvullok
October 29, 2017
Mind sending the lyrics so I can practice? I'm pretty good at the English version.
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Zinrahzul October 30, 2017 |
Here's the updated script for it: https://pastebin.com/dMU2C5Pf |
by Zinrahzul
October 30, 2017
Here's the updated script for it:
https://pastebin.com/dMU2C5Pf
https://pastebin.com/dMU2C5Pf
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