Because of the impending vocabulary overhaul, I have been challenging myself to think in canon. I only intended to learn the words, but alas, this thing somehow formed in my head and had to be let out. (It's in the same meter as Lovaas do Joorre because, frankly, I couldn't stop it.)

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Daalsezin

1.
Drey lahney sahrot dovahthur
fod rahgol Keinserot
Joor danaan zul voth lingrah dur
ahrk sahlo meyro jot.

Voth zeymah frin, vahriin do uth
rok unt wah mindoraan
bok kolos wundun vensewuth
ahrk morah norok shaan.

2.
Rul lahvraan onikaan boziik
pah rotte drey motaad
Ond, vofun lot lost zahrahmiik
nuz sahvot lost unslaad.

Nust komeyt strun ol zeymahhe
drey Thu'um dwiirok pah ul
Nol tuz do kinzon hahdrimme
nivahzah rot bovul!

3.
Brit krongrah nau daar revak frod
aak orin ko un sul
Ahrk enook kiir do nonvul brod
niin werid voth pah zul.

Rul Tinvaak mah wah grind oblaan
vodahmaan rot kruziik
Ruz yol do rok wo lost balaan
fen drun faal laat saviik.

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Feedback is welcome, as usual.

This is great, Freymulaar, thanks for sharing! I love how you're not afraid to change up word order, and on top of all else, it rhymes. Definitely worth putting in the Library.

nice creativety and nice combination

could be better prounced but that is me

Wow, these poems are well crafted. Thanks for continuing to write in the language, Freymulaar.

--Kogaan fah pruzah koraav ko mindoraan do rot.--

i am amazed

what is it in english?

yolviingdinok

what is it in english?

Here's a line-accurate translation.

1.
There once lived a mighty dragon overlord
when the War of Words raged.
Mortals had long been spoiling the Voice
with their foolish mouths.

With his brothers loyal and eager
he tried to understand
the age when old ways were followed
and fierce inspiration ruled.

2.
When they gathered wisdom boldly
all words did tremble
For the sacrifice was great
but the faith was unending.

They started the storm together,
their Thu'um carved all eternity
From the blades of sharp minds
all false words did flee.

3.
Their beautiful victory on that sacred field
still guides us to this day
and every child of the noble clan
praises them with all his voice.

When the Speech falls to meet its end
having forgotten the old words,
then the fire of the worthy one
will bring the last savior.

Would it be alright if I were to use this for a RP?

YolGoraagSingh

Would it be alright if I were to use this for a RP?

By all means you may. Just tell me the location of this RP, and mention or link me somewhere in it, please.

this is a great poem frey